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It came with our reviling,
scowling, surreptitious smiling
and our lust,
veiling shrouded symbols, torturing our trust.
And I thought
that this travesty of love might find us
caught in the act,
my dream of loyalty shrivelled and cracked.
©2006-2009 ~zephyrus7
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The title says it all.

This poem is meant to be spoken. Apologies if it doesn't come across very well in text.

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:iconharpyemma:
I like it. It's so subversive and... coy.

Enough said, methinks.

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//What a thrill/ My thumb instead of an onion/ The top quite gone/ Except for a sort of hinge/ Of skin. Dead white/ Then that red plush//~Sylvia Plath~
:iconfeetpeet:
I think it comes off just as well in text.
Lovely work.

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:iconzephyrus7:
Glad to hear it! Thanks :)
:iconfeetpeet:
No problem! You should update more!

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:iconzephyrus7:
lol I really should. I don't write very often though :(
:iconwrenwatcher:
How you manage to stun me every time I read your words, I will never know. Absolutely fabulous piece, my good man.
:iconzephyrus7:
Hah wow what a compliment thank you very much! :) Well I'm very glad you like my writing, and cheers for the :+fav: too!
:iconfeetpeet:
I understand that, I barely ever draw anymore

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