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No sooner has that become this
Than it is transformed to that again.

Chris rarely listens outside,
He is too fascinated by the world.
I am trying to explain
the Metamorphoses in a way
that forces him to concentrate,
but the subtleties confuse him.
“I reach for that glove.
I wear it. It is a good fit,
It hugs but does not squeeze,
It warms but does not heat.”
He thinks I am delusional.
He looks at me, quizzically,
Then at the glove. I turn
Around, then back to him.
“Here, try this on, it is a
glove. It will fit you well,
It is soft but not weak,
It is plain but not dull.”
I remove one of his mittens
And slide his hand into the glove.
It does not fit him. It is far too large.
I try on his mitten and move us along,
But my fingers get cold. I turn back to him,
“Would you like me to take that glove back, Chrat?”
He looks bewildered. He holds out his hand,
Then his eyes start to sparkle, and, “Chris!” he squeals.
I kneel down, kissing his shivering cheek,
Returning his mitten, I father a smile
His eyes burst with colour, an opaline shine,
And we move along, his hand small in mine.
©2006-2010 ~zephyrus7
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Author's Comments

I've been reading a lot of O'Hara lately. Fantastic poetry, for anyone who's interested. Carcanet do a pretty good selection, though they miss out a few of his better ones.

So yeah, this is a bit of a new style for me, and, to be honest, not one I'm entirely comfortable. It was fun writing, though.

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:icondreamquixote:
i love that the subtleties are not on the metamorphisis of the glove through the this and that.

a lot of the communication here is completely not verbal.

what a beautiful poem - nice flow and language.
:iconfeetpeet:
It sounds nice, it has a good flow to it and it quite me amused the way through.

aka I wish I could comment properly on lit.

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:) Thank you - I will get back to your note asap - sorry I don't have very much internet access at the moment, am doing a PC-Laptop transition and my Laptop doesn't have internet.
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Thank you very much, it's greatly appreciated - I'm glad you liked it so much.
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No worries, I will not like hunt you down and make faces at you cause you have crap/no existant internet.

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:iconfeelinhungry:
I particularly appreciate the last two lines. Definitely a different style, but not a bad thing. Exceptional, as usual... :heart:

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EEk, I love this. It's SO awsome, keep it up, LOVE the style!!

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Haha wow well thank you, what a compliment.

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